Friday, September 22, 2017

endangered animals

we were reading bats that walk on the ground.
the hard thing about doing this is when we had to publish it to my blog and get the images.
the thing I like about it was when I had to just remembered that tutara are endangered.

Thursday, September 21, 2017

WALT stretch out our writing and make it more interesting.

Writing Workshop 2, 19/9/2017.
WALT stretch out our writing and make it more interesting.
Success Criteria: We started out with a simple sentence then made it better.
Our simple sentence was I walked home from school yesterday.

Yesterday I slowly walked home from school. I was feeling lazy and the beautiful sun was shining brightly down on my face making me relaxed. That's when I noticed something by my leg and I looked down. I saw a unicorn at my foot. It was mystical. I then heard an attractive tui cackling it’s melody. Then I saw a majestic crab with it’s rainbow legs. It tried to lure me with its  I tried to take my eyes off of it but it was stylish but then I finally saw my house was close. To the beach so then when I did my bag I went back to  where I saw it but then it vanished so then I went back and tucked myself in my blanket.

the hard part of doing this work was when I had to fix up all my work and do my punctuation.

Thursday, August 31, 2017

Head line news

One night I saw a shadow pass my window as fast as a flash. when It passed it was like a blur. it slowed down for me to see then I crept to my window I saw a graesh  whitish person it looked like a ahhh! zombie! run wait no it is a person I grabbed my chrome book and searched o it is Solomon Grundy born on Monday.

Friday, August 11, 2017

digging deeper

we have been digging deeper that means that means that we make a sentence that is boring then we add some detail then we add some more detail. what I enjoyed that was when we did it it was fun because when we had to get the pictures we got to to look at the pictures as well.

Thursday, August 10, 2017

Making connections with the world..

WALT:to make text to the world connections

We read a book about Christchurch and there was a team called the alright team they were making posters to make people feel better. Our teacher said we had to do the same thing but in our community.
This is what I did
When was the last time you played a game with your family?

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Wednesday, July 26, 2017

First:Maia was sad because she didn't like her poi because it had a hole in it and the taura was loose and the huka huka
had fallen of.

Second:Her teacher was angry with her because she was breaking her poi and all the foam was at her feet and her teacher would easily see that she was breaking it because all the foam was at her feet and she had to go to the principal and the principal said miss taipa is making new poi for the festival and then she joined miss taipa to make pois for the festival.

Last:The people from the kapahaka group went to the festival and they won for the best poi.

Friday, July 7, 2017

WALT write a recount

Firstly we talked about what we were going to do.
Manuera said “Shall we play”.
“Yes” replied Te Kawana.
Then Manuera, Ihaka and I played
Te Kawana caught up to Manuera very fast because he is good. Very good.
After, Ihaka and I went home and started to play on the x-box. We played on the x-box.

It was fun because I had not seen Te Kawana in a week.